Wednesday, May 09, 2007

3WW #35 !!

3WW Wednesday again! this is very exciting.
this weeks 3 words are: packed, cozy, anticipation

so here goes:

A Hit

'Are you ready?'
'I'm all packed and ready!' answered Brad in an excited tone.
'come on then.' whispered Jane as she headed towards the fire alarm device ,'We've got to be fast!'
'I can't believe we got all that money!' Brad's mouth was shaking at the angles. It was the first time he stole something. Jane has been trying to convince him to work with her since they were together in high school years back, and finally Brad accepted to join her.

Jane wasn't that tall, but she managed to use a chair to reach the fire alarm device on the ceiling. She took out her cigarette lighter and started heating the device. In no time the alarm went off. Jane pulled Brad's shirt as they sped towards the door.
'Now nobody will notice our hurry Brad' smiled Jane as she began to run.
'I can't wait to start spending my share' Brad's eyes were shining already.

5 minutes later they were both outside the hotel building, each carrying a backpack filled with 100 dollar bills.
'why didn't you park any closer Jane?' asked Brad 'And when the hell are you gonna tell me how you knew this guy carried all this money?!'
'Shut up Brad' whispered Jane firmly, Brad has never seen her frown like that before.'people can hear us dummy.'
Brad was filled with anticipation and eagerness. As soon as they shut Brad's apartment door behind them, he ran towards his bedroom.
Brad has never seen his room so cozy. He was so excited he couldn't speak. The only thing he wanted to do is just stare at the money as he unpacked it on his bed.

'This IS a large sum of money' said Brad unbelievingly 'I don't even know how I'm gonna spend it all'

'Hold it man' Jane interrupted his flow of dreams. 'you are not getting all that by yourself'

'What do you mean Jane?' asked Brad,'we split it equally in the hotel room remember?'

'Who said anything about splitting it in half Brad!' cut in Jane,'you are only getting 10 grand!'

'Whah! ten! only ten?!' complained Brad very loudly.

'Take it or leave it sweets' said Jane calmly, 'you forgot that you did nothing but keep me company, and honestly I think 10 is too much!'

Brad couldn't believe himself. He had piles of money on his bed and a bag loaded with more in his apartment, and he would end up with just a bite of the cake!
Something must be done!

'you said no one knows about this hit, right Jane?' asked Brad as Jane went to take a shower.

'don't worry dear, no one knows, now relax!' ordered Jane, 'and it's not called a hit, a hit is when you kill someone!'

'thanks for the lesson Jane!' Brad didn't sound okay. something was definitely going on in his mind. He sat on his bed, looking at the money. He had a serious look on his face. He suddenly jumped up and looked all over his room for something. He looked under his bed and smiled as he pulled out his old baseball bat. It was heavy!

'Jane?' Brad said loudly as he approached the bathroom door. 'remember when i used to scrub your back in the shower back in high school?'

'oh Brad! do you really think this is the right time for making love?' Jane pulled the shower curtain wide open and smiled at Brad who had his arms behind his back hiding something.
Jane actually thought that sex wasn't such a bad idea to celebrate the money.

'come here baby!', said Jane softly as she reached out to pull Brad into the shower with her.

'no Jane, lets do it like in the old times, you turn your back to me as i take off my clothes'

'okay!' Jane obeyed with no idea what was going on in Brad's head.
Brad's eyes where filled with a frightening look. he pulled the heavy baseball bat from behind him and raised it high in the air. Jane had her back to him. She was humming a song and dancing slowly in the shower. Her sexy naked figure didn't pull Brad's attention at all.

'What the hell is taking you so long!' shouted Jane as she started to turn her face towards Brad. Brad didn't waste any more time. He went straight down on her head with his full might.He could hear her skull crack as gushes of blood fountained from her head and eyes turning everything around red. Jane lay dead on the bathroom floor.
Brad wasted no time. He grabbed both back packs after stuffing them with the money and left.He was planning how he could get out of the state before the whole police was after him.He knew it was so easy to escape if you paid the right price for it.
3 hours later Brad was on board a plane. He remembered the look of Jane, his once high school girl friend, dead on the floor.
'now that is what you call a hit!' whispered Brad to himself as he smiled peacefully.
All he could think about now is how he's going to spend the money.

7 comments:

Sophisticated Writer said...

But hey why did Brad get away with it? He deserves to die...

ILU

uberjam said...

money IS the root of all evil after all. :)

thanks for dropping by my blog. glad you liked my story. they really ARE always that short. lol. :)

i linked you up. hope you don't mind.

m0tasim said...

sure uberjam, u r welcomed always man. take care! :)

Bone said...

That kind of reminded me of that movie with Kevin Bacon and those girls... Wild Things or something.

Thanks for participating.

Anonymous said...

good ending

Anonymous said...

radical. greed is poison. cool story

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